愁丝

罗志海

愁丝

清风爽爽荷塘静
细雨飘飘兰巷幽
曾许相思潜入梦
又将寂寞酿成愁

格律体新诗●七绝罗志海著译
第11049首对联体诗2020年11月29日


Melancholy

The clear breeze was cool and the lotus pond was quiet
The drizzle was floating and the orchid lane was secluded
Once allowed the lovesickness to sneak into the dream
Also took the loneliness to brew melancholy

Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,049th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/29/2020

龚素文

构文笔流畅，收纵有致， 些许惆怅诗中，余韵悠长。赏学祝好

蓝荷

笔力不凡，谋篇有序，描写传神，精炼有致，余味悠长。

陈何兰

好作加精

陈何兰

清风爽爽荷塘静
细雨飘飘兰巷幽
曾许相思潜入梦
又将寂寞酿成愁     结的委婉动人

陈何兰

拜读佳作，学习点赞。祝福安好，愿尊敬的罗老师吉祥如意！

罗志海

陈何兰 发表于 2020-12-1 05:29
清风爽爽荷塘静
细雨飘飘兰巷幽
曾许相思潜入梦

谢谢版主加精！

罗志海

龚素文 发表于 2020-11-30 10:35
构文笔流畅，收纵有致， 些许惆怅诗中，余韵悠长。赏学祝好

谢谢你的点评！

罗志海

蓝荷 发表于 2020-12-1 05:16
笔力不凡，谋篇有序，描写传神，精炼有致，余味悠长。

谢谢你的点评！

罗志海

探索

釣叟泛江湖，雾霞漫漫叟參詳，晴川碧水波光閃
樵夫挑日月，峰嶺重重夫悟透，峽谷清泉石面流
紅深癡柳綠，半夜翩飛千只鳥，莫道空風來寂寞
綠淺醉桃紅，三弦瀲起一池波，應當未雨就綢繆

格律体新诗 ● 十九绝罗志海著译
第11056首对联体诗 2020年11月30日


Explored

An old fisherman rowing in the rivers and lakes
he carefully observed and studied fog and clouds vast
the green water in the sunny river and the wave light flickering

A woodcutter carried the sun and moon
he understood through the peaks and ridges pile by pile
in gorge, the clear spring over the surface of stones flowing

Red deep to infatuate the willow green
at the midnight, thousands of birds were flying lightly
not let the empty wind be lonely

Green shallow to intoxicate peaches red
three strings made a pool of ripple
should prepare before raining

Metric New Poetry ● Nineteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,056th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/30/2020