幼儿园大班娃写给中华诗词学会的公开信
Zhonghua shici xuehui de yeye nainaimen: 中华诗词学会的爷爷奶奶们: Ninmenhao!Zhefengxin shi wo huale yige duo yue cai xiechengde,woshi renzhen xiede,xiwang yeyenainaimen yeneng renzhendi kanxiaqu。Yinwei shizi taishao,zhineng yong hanyupinyin daitile。Sisheng fuhao henmafan,ye shengluele。You 《zhonghuatongyun》bianxie renyuan zuo houdun,xiangxin yeyenainaimen yinggai douneng kandongba。
您们好!这封信是我花了一个多月才写成的,我是认真写的,希望爷爷奶奶们也能认真地看下去。因为识字太少,只能用汉语拼音代替了。四声符号很麻烦,也省略了。有《中华通韵》编写人员做后盾,相信爷爷奶奶们应该都能看懂吧。
Wo shi mou shengcheng youeryuan daban de xuelingqian ertong,jinnian 6sui。Zai guo liangge duo yue,jiuyao shang xiaoxue le。Wo bama doushi daxue biye,ye dou xihuan shici。Tanmen xiang rangwo shang yige shici tese xuexiao,na shi quanguo youmingde zhongdian xiaoxue,yuwen kebenzhong you yiban kewen doushi gushici。Weile burang wo shuzai qipaoxian shang,bama zaojiu geiwo souji le xuege xuejiemen yi dao liu nianji yuwen shu shang de gushici。
我是某省城幼儿园大班的学龄前儿童,今年6岁。再过两个多月,就要上小学了。我爸妈都是大学毕业,也都喜欢诗词。怹们想让我上一个诗词特色学校,那是全国有名的重点小学,语文课本中有一半课文都是古诗词。为了不让我输在起跑线上,爸妈早就给我搜集了学哥学姐们一到六年级语文书上的古诗词。
Wa,ersanbai shou ne,wo yijing beide henshule。Women youeryuan yeshi shici tese youeryuan,nali de laoshi ye jiao women beisong gushici。Yixie shi xinde,yixie shi chongfude,wo dou beide henshule。Wo zhidao bi wanghengyi gege hai chadeyuan ne,keshi yeyou sansibai shou le。Quanshi beide henshu de nazhong e,jiushi chabuduo keyi daobeiruliu de nazhong。hai mei beishu de,wo dou mei suan zainei。
哇,二三百首呢,我已经背得很熟了。我们幼儿园也是诗词特色幼儿园,那里的老师也教我们背诵古诗词。一些是新的,一些是重复的,我都背得很熟了。我知道比王恒屹哥哥还差得远呢,可是也有三四百首了。全是背得很熟的那种哦,就是差不多可以倒背如流的那种。还没背熟的,我都没算在内。 Youge laoshi shici shuiping chaojibang,chule jiao women beisong shici,hai gei women jiangle henduo shici gushi,biru wangchangling、gaoshi、wangzhihuan saishi de gushi,te haowan。Laosh hai jiaowomen bushao shici changshi,biru yayun,te haoting。Laoshi shuo,wangwei、lihe xiang women zhemda de shihou,dou neng gei women laoshi dang laoshi le。Laoshi haishuo,zanmen zhongguo henchang shijian doushi shi de guodu,libai、dufu、wangwei、baijuyi,heduo henduo gudai dashiren yijing huazuo tianshangde xingxing,meitian wanshang dou shenshizhe、zhaoyaozhe tanmen naxie laoyibei,ye zhushizhe、zhaoyaozhe women xiaozibei。Laoshishuo,suiran xingxing buhui shuohua,dan ta wanquan keyi ganshou de dao。Laoshi xiwang,women jianglai yeneng youren chengwei tiansahng de xingxing。
有个老师诗词水平超级棒,除了教我们背诵诗词,还给我们讲了很多诗词故事,比如王昌龄、高适、王之涣赛诗的故事,特好玩。老师还教我们不少诗词常识,比如押韵,特好听。老师说,王维、李贺像我们这么大的时候,都能给我们老师当老师了。老师还说,咱们中国很长时间都是诗的国度,李白、杜甫、王维、白居易,很多很多古代大诗人已经化作天上的星星,每天晚上都审视着、照耀着怹们那些老一辈,也注视着、照耀着我们小字辈。老师说,虽然星星不会说话,但他完全可以感受得到。老师希望,我们将来也能有人成为天上的星星。 Laoshi hanzhe yanlei shuo,xianzai de shicijie chedi buxing le,shi bushi yun buyun de,yiqie quandou luantaole,zaogao de hen,jianzhi zaotoule。Laoshi hai gei women jiangle pingshuiyun he 《zhonghua tongyun》de qiushi,tebie shengqidi shuo,quandou shi shicijie gaoceng nabang waihang laogan rede huo。Xianzai shi juneiren wuliziba,juwairen wulihuitian。Laoshi yueshuo sangmen yueda,shuozhe shuozhe jiu kule。Women haojige xiaopengyou ganjin paoshangqu di shoupa。Laoshi tingle yihuier,jiezhe you yuzhongxinchangdi shuo:“women laoyibei buxingle,”changjianghoulangcuiqianlang,women laoyibei buxingle,zhenxing shicide xiwang,jiu jituo zai nimen qingshaonian shenshangle。Haizimen,jiayou!“
老师含着眼泪说,现在的诗词界彻底不行了,诗不诗韵不韵的,一切全都乱套了,糟糕得很,简直糟透了。老师还给我们讲了平水韵和《中华通韵》的糗事,特别生气地说,全都是诗词界高层那帮外行老干惹的祸。现在是局内人无力自拔,局外人无力回天。老师越说嗓门越大,说着说着就哭了。我们好几个小朋友赶紧跑上去递手帕。老师停了一会儿,接着又语重心长地说:“长江后浪催前浪,我们老一辈不行了,振兴诗词的希望,就寄托在你们青少年身上了。孩子们,加油! Houlai,laoshi youshuo,xianzai shicijie gaoceng chunshu waihang lingdao neihang,shi dididaodaode xiazhihui,shi yiqihunhunshirenzhaozhao。Laoshishuo,haoji shinian le,congdongdaoxi,congnandaobei,quanguo dou bei bipozhe caiyongde zhonggu pingshuiyun,benlai zaoyi chengwei munaiyi,que bei naxie waihang laogan huotong jiangren,haiyou tamen xiaji de xiaji、tudi de tudi,yiji geserendeng,yong batai dajiao qianhuhouyong di ying taishang le tian。Xiaopengyoumen,zhidao sha shi munaiyi bu?E,qianwan bie haipa,munaiyi shi side,bu yaoren。Jiandan di shuo,munaiyi jiushi ganshi,jiushi henjiu henjiu yiqian diule xingming,shiqu shuifen,zhihui baizhe yige tongyangde zishi ciyaliezui di xiahuren,que genben buneng dongtan,geng buhui shuohua de ganbie de siren。Qiangpo quanguo caiyong zhonggu pingshuiyun de ren,qishi jiushi bizhe dangdai huoren qu xue gudai siren shuohua。 Zhiyu xuede xiang buxiang,najiu meiren guan le,zhiyao ni neng ba ren mengzhu、hu zhu,na ni jiu suan lihai,jiushi gaoshou,jiushi gaoya,jiushi shiren。Yueshi gunongxuanxu di mengren huren,ni jiu yue xiande gaoshenmoce,yejiu yue lihai,zhizhi siwujidan di hufeng shenzhi zifeng zhuming shiren yihuo dashiren。
后来,老师又说,现在诗词界高层纯属外行领导内行,是地地道道的瞎指挥,是以其昏昏使人昭昭。老师说,好几十年了,从东到西,从南到北,全国都被逼迫着采用的中古平水韵,本来早已成为木乃伊,却被那些外行老干伙同匠人,还有他们下级的下级、徒弟的徒弟,以及各色人等,用八抬大轿前呼后拥地硬抬上了天。小朋友们,知道啥是木乃伊不?哦,千万别害怕,木乃伊是死的,不咬人。简单地说,木乃伊就是干尸,就是很久很久以前丢了性命,失去水分,只会摆着一个同样的姿势呲牙咧嘴地吓唬人,却根本不能动弹,更不会说话的干瘪的死人。强迫全国采用中古平水韵的人,其实就是逼着当代活人去学古代死人说话。至于学得像不像,那就没人管了,只要你能把人蒙住、唬住,那你就算厉害,就是高手,就是高雅,就是诗人。越是故弄玄虚地蒙人唬人,你就越显得高深莫测,也就越厉害,直至肆无忌惮地互封甚至自封著名诗人抑或大诗人。 Laoshi shuo,yiqian beibiwunai de shihou,tan ziji ye cengyong zhonggu pingshuiyun xieguo shi,hai ceng chuguo hao jiben shiji,que baisong dou meiren yao。Laoshi jusang di shuo,yishidao shangdang shoupian zhihou,chabuduo you yigeyue shihijian dou huan buguo shenlai。Zuihou,qunian shiyi xiaochangjia de shihou,cai yibahuo ba shiji he pingshuiyun shu quanshaole,ba zhihui ye quandou rengdao lajidui li qule。Laoshishuo,zheshi xiang guoqu gaobie,bu zheyang bu zuyi chedi liaoduan。Laoshishuo,tan shi kandao《zhojgguo dangdai gudian shici baipishu》shi,cai huangrandawu de。Youqi shi kandao chuanghui yuanlao men de chuxin yiyuan de shihou,tan de xinli zhongyu chedi shiqu pingheng,yinwei tan de mingzi jiujiao Chuxin。Laoshi jiezhe shuo,zui keqi de shi,zhidao xianzai,nabang qiangxing wudao de waihang men juran hai,hai,hai……Shuodaozheli,laoshi zhishi yigejiner di “hai”,que shuo bucheng yijuhua。Yuanlai laoshi you kule,erqie kude geng shangxin le。Henduo xiaopengyou dou pao shangqu quan,quan le bantian,laoshi cai bukule。Keshi,tan que zaiye shuo bu xiaqu le。
老师说,以前被逼无奈的时候,怹自己也曾用中古平水韵写过诗,还曾出过好几本诗集,却白送都没人要。老师沮丧地说,意识到上当受骗之后,差不多有一个月时间都缓不过神来。最后,去年十一小长假的时候,才一把火把诗集和平水韵书全烧了,把纸灰也全都扔到垃圾堆里去了。老师说,这是向过去告别,不这样不足以彻底了断。老师说,怹是看到《中国当代古典诗词白皮书》时才恍然大悟的。尤其是看到中华诗词学会创会元老们的初心遗愿的时候,怹的心理终于彻底失去平衡,因为怹的名字就叫初新。老师接着说,最可气的是,直到现在,那帮强行误导的外行们居然还,还,还……说到这里,老师只是一个劲儿地“还”,却说不成一句话。原来老师又哭了,而且哭得更伤心了。很多小朋友都跑上去劝,劝了半天,老师才不哭了。可是,怹却再也说不下去了。 Zaihoulai,laoshi youshuo,congciyihou,tan xieshi zaiyebuyong pingshuiyunle。Laoshishuo,pingshuiyun qihsi jiushi burang ren haohao yinshi,jiushi yao ba zhengchangren biancheng yaba,ba zuozhe he duzhe dou biancheng yaba。Laoshi haishuo,tan xianzai caiyong gengwei helide hanyupinyin 24yun,jiushi ba ie、üe hebingle,zaiba shejian qianhouyin hebingle。Laoshi dingzhu women shuo,nimen shangxiaoxuehou ruguo yexiang xieshi,zhijie caiyong nimen xuexi hanyupinyin guochengzhong ziranerran xingchengde 26yun jiuxing,shuo zheyang haowufudan,shangchuzhonghou keyi guibingcheng 24yun,shang gaozhonghou keyi jinyibu guibingcheng 21yun。Shuodaozheli,laoshi you jidongle,jiadale sangmen shuo:21yun shi dixianle,bunengzaishaole,zaishao jiu bushi namehuishile。《zhonghuatongyun》chunshu waihang hunao,na bushi geinimen yongde,ershi gei baihuzi laotou he baitoufa laotaitai yongde。Nimen yihou qianwan bieyong,na shi zai wurenzidi a! 再后来,老师又说,从此以后,怹写诗再也不用平水韵了。老师说,平水韵其实就是不让人好好吟诗,就是要把正常人变成哑巴,把作者和读者都变成哑巴。老师还说,他现在采用更为合理的汉语拼音24韵,就是把ie、üe合并了,再把舌尖前后音合并了。老师叮嘱我们说,你们上小学后如果也想写诗,直接采用你们学习汉语拼音过程中自然而然形成的26韵就行,说这样毫无负担,上初中后可以归并成24韵,上高中后可以进一步归并成21韵。说到这里,老师又激动了,加大了嗓门说:21韵是底限了,不能再少了,再少就不是那么回事了。《中华通韵》纯属外行胡闹,那不是给你们用的,而是给白胡子老头和白头发老太太用的。你们以后千万别用,那是在误人子弟啊! Jinjiezhe,laoshi you zuolege xiao shiyan:laoshi xianyong e yu ie、üe heyun yinle jiju,you ba e yu ie、üe fenyun yinle jiju,ranhou wenwomen,qianbiande haoting haishi houbiande haoting?women quanban jishige xiaopengyou yikoutongsheng di huida:“houbiande haoting。“laoshi youwen,e yu ie、üe heyun jiujing shi buhaoting ne,haishi hennanting ne?Women you yikoutongsheng di huida:”hennanting!“Genqianbian buyiyangde shi,zheci haiyou qibage xiaopengyou qizuibashe di shuo:nanting sile、yidianer yebu yayun、shenme wanyier a!Jiezhe,laosh youba i yun yu shejian qianhouyin fenfenhehe di yinle jiju,xiaopengyoumen de fanying gen gangcai chabuduo,doushuo heyun tainantingle。
紧接着,老师又做了个小试验:老师先用e与ie、üe合韵吟了几句,又把e与ie、üe分韵吟了几句,然后问我们,前边的好听还是后边的好听?我们全班几十个小朋友异口同声地回答:“后边的好听。”老师又问,e与ie、üe合韵究竟是不好听呢,还是很难听呢?我们又异口同声地回答:“很难听!”跟前边不一样的是,这次还有好几个小朋友七嘴八舌地说:难听死了、一点儿也不押韵、什么玩意儿啊!接着,老师又把i韵与舌尖前后音分分合合地吟了几句,小朋友们的反应跟刚才差不多,都说合韵太难听了。
Zhidao zuihou,laoshi cai jieshishuo:you quanguo gedi de shicigongyi zhiyaunzhe zaizuo shehui diaocha,feichang ganxie xiaopengyoumen de peihe! Kanlai,zai shengyun zhejianshishang,nimende renzhi nengli bingbu yayu shicijie gaoceng waihang laogan he suanfu jiangren a!Ruguo buba mingzhengyanshun de quanli jiaohuan gei nimen qingshaonian,zhonghua chuantong shici ke zhenjiu chedi wanleya!
直到最后,老师才解释说:有全国各地的诗词公益志愿者在做社会调查,非常感谢小朋友们的配合!看来,在声韵这件事上,你们的认知能力并不亚于诗词界高层外行老干和酸腐匠人啊,如果不把名正言顺的权利交还给你们青少年,中华传统诗词可真就彻底完了呀!
Jiexialai,laoshi hai genwomen jiangle shengyun yizhi jiqi poqiexing。Laoshishuo,yizhi jiushi huanqi,jiushi bian wusheng wei yousheng,erqie shizaibixing,keburonghuan。Laoshi hai tebie mingque di zhichule zuai、chizhi zhechang lishixing dabianju de genben yuanyin,shuo genzi zai shangceng,zai zhonghuashicixuehui。Laoshihaishuo,guojiaxingwangpifuyouze,shicixingwang,nimen xiaopengyou tongyang youze。Laoshi rang women yiding jizhu tan de hua,jianglai women zhen chengqihou le,tan zai jiuquanzhixia cai hui mingmu de。 接下来,老师还跟我们讲了声韵易帜及其迫切性。老师说,易帜就是换旗,就是变无声为有声,而且势在必行,刻不容缓。老师还特别明确地指出了阻碍、迟滞这场历史性大变局的根本原因,说根子在上层,在中华诗词学会。老师还说,国家兴亡匹夫有责,诗词兴亡,你们小朋友同样有责。老师让我们一定记住怹的话,将来我们真成气候了,怹在九泉之下才会瞑目的。
Shuodaozheli,laoshi you kule。Wo houlai chaguo zidian,yuanlai “jiuquan” shizhi dixia shenchu,shi maizang siren de difang。Wo ye kule。
说到这里,老师又哭了。我后来查过字典,原来“九泉“是指地下深处,是埋葬死人的地方,也就是阴间。我也哭了。 Laoshi hai tebie renzhen di shuo,nimen dangzhong youzhiqi jianglai chengwei shiren de,keyi ba nimen xinli zhenshide xiangfa xiechulai,yong hanyupinyin jiuxing。Zheyangde ke women yihou haiyao shang,nimen keyi daishang luyinji,huo yong shouji luxialai,biyaoshi,keqing nimen bama bangmang zhengli,danshi bixu dei neng fanying nimen zuizhenshide xiangfa。Yigeyue hou,ba xiechulai de dongxi jiaogeiwo,tongguo qita qudao fanying wenti yexing。Weile zai zhenzheng yiyi shang zhenxing shici,wohui xiangfangshefa xiang shangbian fanying nimen zhexie zuguo xiaohuaduo men de hushing de。Xiexie nimen! Buzhidao weishenm,laoshi shuodao zheli,jing chao women xiaopengyou shenshendi ju le yigong。
Zaiwanghou,laoshi hai gei women jiangle genading yeye de gushi。Dang youren wen,shui zhenneng dudechu tingdedong zhonggu pingshuiyun de shihou,shicijie henduo youtouyoulian de darenwu dou bierbuda,ji bugan da neng,you bugan da buneng,jieguo dangzhe zhongren diule mianzi。Danshi,tongyang shi pingshuiyun shiren,genading yeye que yigejianbu chongshangqu,feichang yonggandi zhanchulai shuo:“shuo shenme zhongguyin,hai dua shuoa!ni dua shuoa?na jiao niaoyu。”Genading yeye t**le,zhenshi womende hao bangyang!“
Laoshi haozhao women xiang Genading yeye xuexi,zuoyige chengshi shouxin de ren。Zai dashidafei mianqian,napa sunshi zijide liyi,ye buneng zhuanglongzuoye,menghunguoguan,gengbuneng meizhe liangxin xiashuobadao。Ruguo lian zuijibende chengxin dou bujiangle,shi babeizi ye wufa chengwe zhenzhengde shiren de。
Zheshi yigeduoyue yiqian de shile,yin wo kewaiban shizai taiduo,jintian cai zhengli chulai,haishi zai laoshi he bama de bangzhuxia cai wancheng de。Xiexie laoshi!Xiexie bama! Zuihou,wo ye xiang wen zhonghuashicixuehui yeyenainaimen jige wenti,haiyou jige qingqiu:
1、Ninmen zhenneng dudechu tingdedong zhonggupingshuiyun ma?Genading yeye shuo,nashi niaoyu,shizhendema?Yaoshi zhende,wojiu buxuele。Niaoyu zaizenme haoting,meichuxuequ,ye xuebuhui ya!Ruguo bushi niaoyu,yougai daonaer、genshui quxuene? 2、《zhonghuatongyun》haojige yunbu shizai shi tai nantingle。Weishenme huizheyang ne?Women laoshishuo,yayun shi weile haoting。Zhonghua shici xuehui、ge shengji shici xuehui qinaide yeyenainaimen,ninmen zhen juede ba e yu ie、üe heyun haotingma?Duo nanting ya! 3、Jiran dajia doushuo pingshuiyun buxing,《zhonghuatongyun》ye buxing,zhongxuesheng shuo buxing,xiaoxuesheng shuo buxing,lian women xiaopengyou men yedou renwei meifar du、meifar ting,huo hennanting,ninmen weishenm bu ganjin xiage mingling xuxiaole ne?Na bushi wei zhongxiaoxuesheng biandema?
4、E,women laoshi haishuo,qu jiaoyuju xiang zai women youeryuan gao 《zhonghuatongyun》shidian jiaoxue,laoshimen yinwei meiyou jiji peihe,haoxiang zaodao le daji baofu,zhonghua shici xuehui he shengji shici xuehui dou bi qujiaoyuju daba?qiu ninmen guanguan jiaoyuju bei。 5、Zhonghua shici xuehui qinaide yeyenainai men,dajia doushuo,ninmen yijing wuliziba le。Jiu yinwei zhege,wobama buxiang rangwo shang shici tese xuexiao le。Yeyenainaimen,qiuqiu ninmenle,qingninmen ganjin ziba,hao rangwo shang nasuo shici tese xuexiao,haobu?
E,zheshi wo shou Genading yeye de qifa,zai laoshi de guli、zhidaoxia coude,buzhidao suanbusuan shi?Timu yizhi meixianghao,najiu xianzheyangba。 Roushen youweimie,chengxin yiguiling。
Duoshao zhuanglongzhe,buru Genading。 Jingzhu zhonghuashicixuehuide yeyenainaimen shentijiankang! Yige youeryuan daban nanhai
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